For our pitch feedback, the response was overall positive because many of my class mates liked the mock up but we did get told to improve some of our work, for example our headline was not bold enough for the audience to see or understand what was typed there. so that had to be improved the picture used for the mock up was from location shot from our music video however we think that it would be more professional by using the studio. rather then a location shoots we have asked the audience for there input and this is what we came to agree with.
