Lena you do give a sense of genre, mise en scene and of the themes touched upon. However you need to add more detailed, specific examples of shots, camera movement and angles and editing. What do these connote? You could have considered star quality and representations. Add stills from the videos to illustrate and embed the videos for reference on your blog. You need to add a slide explaining very clearly which elements you can use / adapt to inspire you in your own music video. You need to do a 3rd case study ASAP as this is overdue, and use this feedback to guide you. Vanessa
Lena you do give a sense of genre, mise en scene and of the themes touched upon. However you need to add more detailed, specific examples of shots, camera movement and angles and editing. What do these connote? You could have considered star quality and representations. Add stills from the videos to illustrate and embed the videos for reference on your blog. You need to add a slide explaining very clearly which elements you can use / adapt to inspire you in your own music video. You need to do a 3rd case study ASAP as this is overdue, and use this feedback to guide you. Vanessa
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